Summer’s Over

With the start of marching band camp, summer officially ends today in the DeJarnett household. Even though school is still a couple weeks away, marching band consumes just as much (or more) time – and separates my kids (no more bickering8-). So, to commemorate the end of a busy summer, I thought we’d play a little “Where’s Robin?”

No, this isn’t a contest, it’s just for fun. I did a lot of traveling this summer, and thought I’d share some photos. Can you guess where I went?

Here’s the first picture – an easy one, I think. Have you been here? Post your guess!

Have you been here?

PS. I’m still working hard on Whirlwind. I hope to make some major announcements VERY SOON, so stay tuned!

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Sometimes Being the Same is Good

One of the adages in my household is ‘if everyone was the same, it’d be boring.’ I’ve always encouraged individuality and self-determination in my kids, trying to steer them away from becoming fad-following teenage sheep. So it’s with hat in hand I admit sometimes being the same is good.

What brought me to this conclusion? Would you believe a concert? Last night I attended one of the high school’s many end of the year events – a concert that included a performance by the guitar ensemble. Twenty-four black-clad guitarists took the stage, each with a nearly identical acoustic guitar. They all looked the same, they all sounded the same…and it was amazing.

I know, “one band, one sound” and all that (5 points if you know what movie that’s from). But even in a band or a choir, there’s still variation. And even in some of the pieces the guitar ensemble played, there were harmonies. But what was surprising was how great it sounded when all 24 guitars played the same note. No differences, no variation. All exactly the same.

There must be some deep philosophical realization to be made here…something like ‘many people working toward a single goal makes achieving it that much better’…or ‘being different isn’t always the best way.’ But I leave it to you to come up with more interesting and meaningful sayings.

I still believe in embracing uniqueness. But sometimes, sharing your uniqueness can lead to something beautiful.

UPDATE: Here they are!

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Are the Amateurs Teaching the Pros?

As an author trying to make it into the big leagues and become published, I’ve spent time in the ‘minors’: posting writing for free on amateur sites like fanfiction.net or fictionpress.com. In that world, the term ‘beta reader’ or just ‘beta’ is common – like us fledgling writers, betas are our fledgling editor counterparts. Betas critique, correct, and compliment with an eye toward improving the writing for readability and improving our review count, not sales. In many cases betas are faceless and voiceless, found through trial and error in that murky cloud called the Internet.

Imagine my surprise when I opened my Romance Writers Report (RWR) to find not only the term ‘beta’ but an entire article** not only defining the word, but encouraging the use of betas by the pros!

**As much as I’d love to point you at the article itself (written by Maria Connor), RWR is published by Romance Writers of America (RWA) for the use of their paying membership, and therefore unavailable to the general public.

Having used a number of beta readers myself (usually two or more on any given piece of writing), I was stunned to see that professional authors were unaware of such a resource. Ms. Connor notes in the opening paragraph that when asked, authors said they’d never used a beta reader, but they did use Kindle readers. REALLY?

Betas are the bread and butter of good amateur writers, the first set of eyes to see a new chapter or story and given carte blanche to not only correct grammar and awkward wordings (and find all my missing words), but to also chime in on plot issues, incomplete descriptions, even things as esoteric as whether or not dialog is appropriate for the era of the story. Ms. Connor details what a writer can expect of a beta and how using one can teach the writer to deal with constructive criticism. She includes a checklist for betas (including asking questions like ‘Are the characters believable?’ or ‘What themes are you finding?’) and advice to the writer (“The number one rule is be nice to your beta.”) – all things that my betas have done for me for years now.

Those of you who know my writing history will be asking yourself (or me) “So what? You know this, we know this, why are you blogging about THIS?”

Simple: This is one occasion where the students may be teaching the teachers.

Many of us trying to earn that magical title of ‘published author’ look to literary agent blogs, publisher websites and best-selling authors tweets to find that trick, that edge, that will push us over the top. What reading this article taught me is: don’t overlook your peers, whether they share your goals or not. They may be your greatest resource!

We all have the ability to be teachers, whether we realize it or not. So the next time you’re asked to look at someone’s writing or beta a story, consider that you may not be helping your friend with her fanfiction, you may be nurturing the next Nora Roberts.

And if you don’t have a beta yet, GET ONE! A friend, a writing partner, even a spouse can do it – just be prepared for an honest and deep evaluation of your work. It’ll be just as hard for your beta to highlight your writing blemishes as it’ll be for you to face them.

NOTE: I will give RWR a plug – it’s one of the many benefits that RWA membership provides. With limited advertising and great articles about the writing craft, profession and publishing industry as a whole, I look forward to receiving it every month. For more info, check out the RWA website at http://www.rwanational.org/.

Also, the RWA national conference is scheduled for July in Nashville – though the current storms and flooding have put the event in jeopardy. If you’d like to support those suffering in the rising waters, please consider donating to the Red Cross: http://www.middletennredcross.org/general.asp?SN=8522&OP=8919&SUOP=9359&IDCapitulo=78T3Z2WSK0

Finally, I’d like to thank my husband for beta-ing this blog entry! Betas ROCK!

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Online Image: To Share or Not to Share

I read a great blog by Jessica Faust from Bookends, LLC today about online persona and social networking. I especially enjoyed the comment of one reader who tracked the agents and publishers she was querying on twitter, only to find they were busy doing everything BUT reading her manuscript! I’ll definitely be adding a quick twitter search to my agent research list.

The idea of separating my personal/informal online life from my professional/business online life isn’t new, but Jessica’s comments and those of her readers gave me more to think about when it comes to this website and blog. To that end, I’ve decided to turn on comments here. I’ve resisted, mostly because of the threat of spammers and other internet nastiness, but I love the idea of discussion, not just me telling you what I think. Honestly, it’s kind of selfish of me – your ideas and comments are probably much more interesting than mine – so I’m probably getting the better end of the deal!

As for the topic of social networking and how personal to post: it’s my intention to only post about things that I’m truly invested in. There has to be some personal tone, I think, but you won’t hear me talking or tweeting about my kids going on the potty. And I hope to give you more than ‘Buy my Book.’

And both my kids are potty trained. Our next hurdle? Driving.

Heaven help us!

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My New Least Favorite Words: I need my glasses

Maybe I’m ignorant or just naïve, but the concept of aging gracefully is completely lost on me.  Yeah, I got the black Over the Hill balloon when I turned forty.  I started getting mammograms and paying more attention to saving for retirement.  I even spotted a gray hair or two on top of my head.  But I didn’t feel old.

Not until I went to the eye doctor last year.

“Let me guess, you’re forty-three,” he said with a smirk.  “You need reading glasses.”

I wanted to slap him.

Now, I have nothing against glasses.  They’re stylish and give the wearer an intellectual look.  Many of the people I love wear glasses on a daily basis.  But reading glasses?  My parents wear reading glasses and they’re old.  (Sorry, Mom and Dad)

All right, it’s not really the glasses.  It’s the fact I need them.  My eyesight’s always been good, and as a reader and writer, it’s my bread and butter.  But last year, I’d noticed reading was exhausting, even headache-inducing.  When the doctor showed me how much clearer things could be with reading glasses, I rejoiced – at first.

The problem is that now I know I can’t see as well, I seem to need the glasses all the time!  Not just for the microscopic printing on the bottom of the mascara bottle, but on simple things like ingredients listings and nutrition labels.  Sometimes I can cheat and hold tiny writing at arm’s length – but that’s even more embarrassing than the glasses!  What’s next?  Pearl glasses holders strung around my neck?

Every time I reach for or hunt down my reading glasses, I’m reminded I’m more than likely on the downhill side of my life.  I’d like to think I’m not vain, but knowing the end of this wild ride is closer than the beginning is sobering.  Can you see why I don’t really love my glasses?

I shouldn’t complain, I know, I should be happy I’ll be able to see my family and my work with the help of my glasses.  I should celebrate that I don’t have to wear them all the time.  Heck, they’re even kind of cute.

Fine, I’ll stop whining and go make dinner.  Course, to read the recipe…

I need my glasses!

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